ten-sentence flash fiction

May 30th, 2015

Sometimes, somebody suggests you do something, and you say that, no, that’s not the kind of thing that you can do, and you put the whole thing out of your (conscious) mind, but somewhere in the back of your mind a different decision is made.

Bryna, over at The Everyday Epic, wrote about a ten-sentence short story. And, much to my surprise, today I wrote one.

And here it is.

* * * * *

“Can you create a rock so big that you yourself can’t lift it?”

“Do you know — can you even imagine — how many people have asked me that question over the years?”

“And how do you usually answer?”

“When somebody asks me that, I create a rock so big that he can’t lift it. Then I drop it on his head. From a tremendous height. Do you still want to ask?”

“No, thank you. So, it’s always guys who ask?”

“No, but I’m old-fashioned.”

* * * * *

The thing I like about it in particular is that it is, I hope, completely comprehensible to the casual reader, but people who have read my stuff will understand it on a different level.

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5 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Maggie  |  May 31st, 2015 at 6:30 am

    Haha, I like that!

  • 2. Anthony Lee Collins  |  June 1st, 2015 at 7:17 am

    It surprised the heck out of me when I wrote it, that’s for sure. I didn’t even know I was working on it. 🙂

  • 3. SB Roberts  |  June 1st, 2015 at 3:22 pm

    Bravo! 🙂 While I haven’t read enough of your works to understand the other level of this story — something I need to work on now that school is out — it made me smile. Sounds like a modernization of a fable I’ve heard before. 🙂

  • 4. Anthony Lee Collins  |  June 2nd, 2015 at 2:42 pm

    It’s always nice when people want to read more of my stuff. 🙂

    Do you know what you want to read next? I know you read Stevie One, but that’s all I remember.

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