write for your characters, not for yourself

I’ve re-watched The Avengers and Iron Man 3 on DVD, and two lines in The Avengers really jumped out at me.

One is a negative example:

Various characters are discussing how crazy Loki is, and Thor says, “Have a care; he is of Asgard, etc. etc. and he is my brother.”

The Widow points out all the people Loki has killed, and Thor immediately says, “He’s adopted.”

This would be a perfectly fine line from Malcolm Reynolds on Firefly, but it’s really wrong for Thor. It’s sort of like holding up a sign saying, “Joss Whedon wrote this screenplay.”

The positive example is from earlier in the picture, when Loki is being transported as a prisoner. Thor shows up, grabs Loki, and flies off. Cap is about to give chase, but Natasha advises him not to, saying that Thor and Loki are basically gods.

“There’s only one God, ma’am, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t dress like that,” is Cap’s reply as he straps on his parachute.

Joss Whedon is an atheist and he got some flack for the line, but:

1) It’s not written for Joss Whedon; it’s written for Steve Rogers, who is not an atheist, and

2) it’s a really sharp line.

So, that’s today’s storytelling lesson from the movies. No matter how clever you think a line is, don’t put it in the mouth of a character who wouldn’t say those words.

how can i miss you when you won’t go away?

For years, maybe decades, the complaint about Broadway is that most shows are revivals or adaptations.  In Hollywood, it's remakes and sequels.

But apparently this is true in the book world as well, to a greater extent than I had thought: " Star Characters, Spun Anew, May Live Well More Than Twice "

Of course, like the "whitewashing" I talked about last time, this endless rehashing of old characters and stories is a commercial decision, not an artistic one.

I read an interview with Len Wiseman, the director of the Total Recall remake, and he said he had been trying to make an original big-budget science-fiction picture, but he couldn't get the money. Studios weren't willing to pay for that, but they were willing to pay for him to remake Total Recall. So, that's what he did.

Which is why we have a movie series and at least two TV shows about Sherlock Holmes.  And, in addition to hundreds of other TV shows about vampires, there is now a show called "Dracula" (though, based on what I've read, it seems only tenuously connected to the book that Bram Stoker wrote).

And, because the Ironside remake was so successful (sarcasm – it's already canceled), now they're doing a remake of Murder She Wrote.

So, what do you think of all of these remakes and sequels? And, if you don't like them, are there any exceptions? For example, I do intend to see Les Miserables when it comes back to Broadway next year. 🙂

race and ethnicity in fiction

I read an interesting blog post over at Maggie Madly Writing called, "Race and Ethnicity in Fiction." (I borrowed her title, too, because I couldn't think of a better one.)

The thing about "whitewashing" in a movie (casting nonwhite characters as white) is that it's a commercial decision. Let's pander to the lowest common denominator and maybe we'll get a few more people into the theater. As a friend of mine said when people complained that a Hunger Games character, who was Black, was played by a Black actress, because they hadn't figured out she was Black when they were reading the book: "I don't know what's more upsetting, the racism or the lack of basic reading comprehension."

But it can be interesting to go the other way, to cast a traditionally white character as non-white. Because, in a lot of cases, the default choice is for all characters to be white (and straight, and in some genres, male) unless the plot demands they be something else. The fact is that for some characters it matters and for some it doesn't. Nick Fury and Alicia Masters were white in the comic books, but there's nothing about the characters that demands that they be white (unlike, for example, Bruce Wayne).

Chris Claremont, a seminal writer for the X-Men comic book early on (back when there was only one X-Men title 🙂 ), used to get mocked because, whenever there was an idea for a new character he would aways ask,"Is there any reason this character couldn't be a woman?" Which is rather mechanical solution, but when pretty much all solo books had male heroes, and superhero teams were all either all male or male with a token female, sometimes you have to hammer at things to loosen them up a bit.

There's a book nowadays called simply "X-Men," and team it's about is all women (and, so far, none of the characters has even commented on this). Comic books these days, in general, are pretty evenly balanced on this question (and, as I said before, it's interesting that the title which carries the tag "Earth's Mightiest Hero" is about a woman).

Of course, if you want to revisit the old days for some reason, you can see the Avengers movie. 🙂

As I said on Maggie 's blog: "...I do think that you can’t just take a character and change his or her race (or, for that matter, change their sex or preference, or their religion). I’ve tried this with some of my characters, as a mental exercise, and it’s been interesting. You start to see what defines characters (and what doesn’t — the areas where the flexibility is). You also come up against the fact that not everybody has access to the same types of life experiences. Which is not an argument against diversity, just against the idea that characters can simply be flipped in one direction or another."

The Hollywood remake of Let the Right One In (Let Me In) was pretty good, but it as nowhere near the original, and one very particular annoyance was that [spoilers!] the sex of one of the characters was changed, making it a pre-teen straight romance (with vampires), instead of what it was in the original (and the book), which was a pre-teen trans love story (with vampires). A lot of people saw the original without picking up on that, which is fine, but for those who did get it, it added a whole additional layer of meaning to some of the scenes. The filmmaker tried to pass this off as a detail, but I don't think a character's sex (or race, etc.) is just a detail, especially when that "detail" is being changed because of the danger that somebody, somewhere, might be offended.

Theater, being a less literal medium, has more flexibility than TV or movies. Lea Salonga can play Eponine in Les Miserables without Eponine being Asian (which she clearly isn't, since we see her parents and it wouldn't make sense in terms of the story anyway). She's just an actress from the Philippines playing a French girl. Many actresses have played Hamlet, and I was just reading about a production of Julius Caesar with all the roles being played by women (and one of Orson Welles' earliest successes was an all-Black "voodoo" production of Macbeth).

In books you have a flexibility that you don't have in movies, television, or even theater: to simply not say what race a character is, or to introduce a character and to delay the information, as I talked about here. You can even, as Sarah Caudwell did in her excellent mysteries, not reveal the sex of your narrator.

i have a strange aversion to the crushingly obvious

I've watched some of Hemingway & Gellhorn – I guess about half. It was okay. I may or may not watch the rest. I sometimes think I know more than enough about Hemingway's life anyway.

Nicole Kidman was excellent (of course) as Gellhorn (wife #3, if you're keeping track). At the beginning, she addresses the camera, as Gellhorn much older (attention, Ridley Scott: this is how you do old age makeup).

But this intro ends with her (referring to love), saying, "I'm a war correspondent." Kidman paused, and I said, "But of course, there are wars and there are wars." And then she said, "Of course, there are wars and there are wars."

This is usually a bad sign. This level of predictability can work in some situations, but mostly it doesn't.

Also, Clive Owen is not a good fit as Hemingway. My mental image of Hemingway was set by Stacy Keach, who played him in a TV miniseries a long time ago. Owen is a very good actor (he's great in Gosford Park), but I'm not buying him as Hemingway.

An example of when predictability does work? The movie LA Confidential, where Exley (Guy Pearce) and Vincennes (Kevin Spacey) are talking, and Exley tells the story of why he became a cop, and then he asks Vincennes the same question.

We've seen that Vincennes is corrupt, and a cop celebrity, and a guy who floats through life without working very hard because he's smarter than everybody else, and his only possible (honest) response to the question of why he became a cop is: "I don't remember." The entire movie has been leading up to him saying those three words.

But Spacey, working at his absolute best, shows us every slow step of Vincennes realizing this, and it's magnificent.

Hemingway & Gellhorn is not operating at anywhere near that level, so the predictability is the other kind, the kind you don't want.

Have you ever had that happen – that one clunky moment early on made you wary of an entire novel or movie?

a tale of two (four) movies

As I've talked about before, movies give us an opportunity that we don't often get with literature – to see deleted scenes, and often to find out something about why those scenes were created and why they were ultimately removed.

I thought about this recently when I saw extended DVD versions of two movies I'd originally seen in theaters.

One was accidental. I'd enjoyed A Perfect Getaway in the theater, and I ordered the DVD from Netflix in order to see it again. It's not a great movie, but it was a good, tight thriller. When I got the DVD, which Netflix had told me was the theatrical version, it was very disappointing. Longer, padded out with irrelevancies, and slowed down with extra flashbacks when the big "secret" is revealed...  it was the extended version.

That's a cardinal sin, by the way: you don't throw in extra scenes when you've hit the accelerator and the story is really starting to move toward the climax. As I've said before, the most common reason I've heard for removing scenes from movies is that the scene killed the momentum of the story.

This experience made me curious to doublecheck my original assessment. It was only ten minutes of additional footage – would that really hurt the movie so much? So, I located the theatrical version (the secret with Netflix was to look at the length, by the way – that was listed correctly). I got it as a download from Google Play, and it was as good as I remembered. It moved along quite briskly, and it trusted the audience to understand the big twist when it was revealed* without extra explanation [footnote contains spoilers].

The other thing about the added scenes that was annoying was the Unrated Director's Cut indicates that there's nudity. Which turned out to be a few extras, doing yoga on a beach, at a distance, naked. It really makes it seem that the "Unrated Director's Cut" is a shill, getting people to pay for a bunch of extra content that makes the movie a lot less than it was before.

 
The other movie was Total Recall (the remake – I've never seen the original). I would have to say it was "okay" when I saw it in the theater. Entertaining, but not great (derivative story, terrific supporting cast but bland leads, good production design but a lot of plot holes, a big fight at the end between the wrong characters). But then I read that it had got chopped up, both for length and to get a PG-13 rating. That got me curious, so I rented the extended version.

It's a mixed bag,  but it's definitely better.  There's more of a sense of the political underpinnings and class divisions that motivate the hero and drive the story. The added scenes tend to be in the early parts of the picture, where more background can be welcome.

And, yes, there's more of the three-breasted prostitute.

But the additional (and, in some cases, different) footage doesn't address the movie's real problems, including that some elements of the plot makes no sense, and Len Wiseman is not a good enough director to overcome that (he's no Ridley Scott 🙂 ). Some of the different footage alters some plotlines, perhaps as an attempt to have the story make more sense, but it just means they make no sense in a different direction.

So, the lessons?

Once the momentum kicks in, respect it. You can alter the pace, but don't slow down too much.

Less can be more. Extra scenes, the ones that don't advance the plot, can be great if they're entertaining enough (the "disgusting English candy drill" in Gravity's Rainbow does nothing to advance the plot, but it's three pages of such hilarity that I've laughed uncontrollably on the subway from reading it – more than once), but they should be early in the story, not near the end.

If you really like a little scene but having it in the story cripples your big finale, the little scene has to go, even if it is really good.

If you have a major antagonist, the final confrontation has to be between the protagonist and the antagonist. Luke has to face Vader.

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* Full disclosure [spoilers!]: A Perfect Getaway was a good thriller even though I knew the "big twist" before I entered the theater. As I talked about in my post "Don't Put Shepherd Book in Your Book," actors can do a lot to improve your story, but how you cast a movie can also reveal how the story is going to go (Roger Ebert talked about this a few times). That major actor who's playing a secondary character, like the protagonist's best friend who isn't involved in the plot? He may be there because he'll turn out to be the murderer in the end.

When I heard the premise of this movie, that a honeymooning couple in Hawaii learns that another, unknown couple is going around killing honeymooning couples, and I learned that the bride was played by Milla Jovovich, I knew that the theoretical protagonists would turn out to be the serial murderers themselves. Because Hollywood, which does tend to typecast, would probably not hire Jovovich to play a victim. Oh, and this switch allowed them to do a few big, corny hero moments, and they work really well because, until then, it hadn't been clear who the real hero of the movie was.

i did not watch the oscars

This will be somewhat disorganized.

First of all, Alexis, over at Bunny Ears & Bat Wings has put up two very interesting posts:

  1. "Killing my internal perfectionist," which is about that but also a whole lot more.
  2. "Takin’ back the unicorn," because, yes, if there were really unicorns, they would not be all cute and cuddly.


So, yes, I did not watch the Oscars. Which is not a big statement – and certainly not a comment on the Oscars as a whole – but most of the films I was rooting for didn't get nominated or were sure not to win. I'm glad that Hathaway and Tarantino won.

I saw Les Miserables again a few days ago, and my feelings about it were pretty much the same (I might even see it again). I did appreciate Hugh Jackman even more this time around, and I do wonder if the song "Suddenly" was added just so that it could get a "Best Original Song" nomination. There's no other reason for is to be there (Jackman does fine singing it, but it adds nothing to the story). As I was watching it, I was imagining Alice in Resident Evil Retribution singing it to her newly-acquired daughter, Becky, and that was kind of amusing ("Trusting me the way you do, I’m so afraid of failing you. Just a child who cannot know, that danger follows where I go. There are shadows everywhere, and memories I cannot share"). But still, the movie would have been better without it.

Before the Oscars, I discovered the Slate Spoiler Special podcasts. They're designed to be listened to after you've seen the film, and I've listened to a few of them. All for movies that I've actually seen, of course (well, except for one...).

The one about Les Miserables posed an interesting idea, that Jean Valjean is a superhero. He has superhuman strength (the strength of four men, according to Victor Hugo), he has a secret identity, he helps others even when it puts his own life at risk, and he has an archenemy. His ultimate victory over his adversary comes about not because of his strength but because he is right (I love Jackman's delivery of the line, "You are wrong, and you always have been wrong").

The part about his strength made me think of Pippi Longstocking. Steig Larsson said that Lisbeth Salander was based on Pippi Longstocking, but I had forgotten (until Wikipedia reminded me) that Pippi was extraordinarily strong. Now that I'm reminded, I do recall the part about her carrying her horse around when he got old. So, I wonder is she was an influence on Vicki, who is also very strong. Maybe, though I think Vicki is more based on Popeye, as I've said before.

It occurred to me that when writers describe characters, they often describe them pretty much entirely from the neck up. I'm reading one book where the protagonist's hair (in all of its aspects), eyes, complexion etc. are described (rather awkwardly) in the first couple of paragraphs, but the rest of her is never described at all. Is she short or tall, thin or muscular, strong or weak, slow or fast? We have no idea.

I don't often think about eye color, for example, probably because I seldom notice it in life (though I can't resist commenting that if you do watch Resident Evil Retribution, keep track of Alice's eye color...). But I think things like body size and type have a much stronger effect on how your personality develops, because they can have a big effect on how you're treated growing up.

I imagine it was a factor in how Jan Sleet's personality developed that she was abnormally tall and abnormally skinny, and that her strength and coordination were (to put it diplomatically) unexceptional. It certainly had more of an effect than her hair (brown, rather limp, shoulder-length) and her eye color (no idea).

Well, I did say this would be disorganized. Coming Friday: another Jan Sleet mystery story. Or maybe two...