names are not easy to change

First of all, there are more parts of The Family Murder Case posted. The new parts start here.

I've been thinking about the names of the mystery stories posted here.

First of all, The U-town Murder Case was originally called that because I thought it was going to be the only one. It turned out to be the first of a series, of course, most of which could have been called "The U-town Murder Case." It took a while to figure out an alternative name, but finally the obvious answer came to me. It should be called "The Apartment Murder Case" (since it is the only one to take place in apartments). I'll change it when I get time, but it will be fairly complex, since the names of the stories generate the URLs (such as http://utownwriting.com/2008/stories/the-u-town-murder-case-part-one). That will take a bit of work to change.

But not as much work as the other change, which is that I think I've got to stop calling them "The xxxxxx Murder Case," since some of them don't actually involve murders. This also started with "The U-town Murder Case," where I thought it was a nice touch to have a title that was a reference to the Philo Vance books (which were always "The xxxxxx Murder Case"). And I didn't think it would be a problem, since I wasn't thinking of a series.

But now I've thought of a new idea for a story, and not only will it not have a murder, it won't even have any violence or injury (well, there will be a broken arm, but that's about it). To call it "The xxxxxx Murder Case" would lead readers to expect a murder to come at some point, and that would distract them from the actual events.

However, to change all of the names, and all the links, and all of the links to the stories, would be way more work than I am going to do. So, they will remain, but the new stories (at least the one I mention above, and the ones after that) will be called "The xxxxxx Mystery" instead.

names (part three)

It's been a while since I've talked about where all the names come from, as I did here and here.

Chapters

To pick up about the chapter titles, most of the titles in the third novel are pretty utilitarian ("A Visit to Perry," "Return to U-town," "On the Medical Team"), but some are references to other things.

"Quartet" is the title of Perry Nelson's third novel (as mentioned in A Sane Woman, and probably elsewhere, too).

"Distance and Time" is the title of Perry Nelson's second novel.

"In the Hotel Bar" is utilitarian, but somebody mentioned that it makes him think of butter, so now it makes me think of butter, so it will be changed to something else in rewrites.

"Absolute Beginners" is a song by David Bowie. A terrifically romantic song, chosen for obvious reasons (I'm particularly fond of the version from the "Bowie at the Beeb" CD, by the way).

"A Journey in the Dark" is the name of the chapter in Lord of the Rings where they go through the mines of Moria.

"A Different Choice" is a quote from my favorite Alanis Morissette song, "Out is Through," which is about how to get through problems, you have to solve them, not sidestep them.

"(At This Moment of) The World" has a double meaning, because The World is the name of Perry Nelson's first novel (by the way, imagine calling your first novel The World, especially when you're still a teenager). But the whole title is a quote from a Joni Mitchell song. You can google it if you want, but I won't name the song or the album here (it's the title track), because it would be a big fat spoiler if you haven't read the novel yet.

People

As for people, I've found that one thing about mystery stories is that you have to create a lot of new characters for each story, and most of them need names. This is a shock for me, since mostly I write about the same characters. New characters are introduced here and there, but usually one at a time.

There is no particular significance to the names of the characters in The Apartment Mystery.

In The School Mystery, which has a lot of suspects, I decided I needed a system, so most of the names of the new characters are from Dark Shadows: Roger, Willy, Amy, James (Jameson), and Carol (Caroline). Some of their physical characteristics and personality traits were shared with the originals, but only up to a point. It was mostly a device to help me keep it all straight. Of course, I avoided having characters named Barnabas, Quentin, and Angelique.

There was a David in Dark Shadows (David Collins, in fact). but the David in the story is quite obviously not based on him. He's based on a friend of mine from high school who was a science fiction enthusiast and who indeed taught some classes at the high school where he was a student.

None of the names in The Hospital Mystery were significant, except that I was inspired by The Dutch Shoe Mystery by Ellery Queen, which took place in a hospital, so I gave the murderer the same name as the killer in that book. Oh, and the gang name "the Scorpions" comes from Dhalgren.

In The Vampire Mystery, most of the new names come from the "Resident Evil" movies: Nikolai, Isaac Ashford, Jillian Wells, Lloyd, Spence, Nurse Betty. If you've seen the movies, you'd probably be able to get some sense of who's more good and who's more evil.

Mindy's name doesn't come from anywhere. Marisa is obviously a reference to Mrs. Coulter (from The Golden Compass), but mostly I just chose it because of the way it contrasted with Mindy. Mindy's home town (Missoula, Montana) was chosen because that's where David Lynch is from, and Mindy seemed a bit like a Lynch heroine (pretty and small-town wholesome, but with darker aspects and depths and possibilities).

Åsa's name didn't come from "Resident Evil," and by the time the story was done, I was certainly tired of typing the HTML code which gives you that little circle on top of the "A."

In the current story, Ron's name isn't a reference to anything. She just barged into my brain one day, announced herself, dropped off some mail, and left.

Stuart Anson, on the other hand, is a deliberate reference to Stuart Rene LaJoie, from the Robert A. Heinlein novel The Moon is a Harsh Mistress ("Anson" was Heinlein's middle name). He's the first elderly character who isn't either a loon (Old Waldo) or a drunken loon (The Professor), and Heinlein novels often included an older character to impart wisdom (Heinlein's wisdom, of course) to the younger protagonist(s). In The Moon is a Harsh Mistress, that character isn't Stuart Rene LaJoie, it's Professor Bernardo de la Paz, the rational anarchist (who is a Loonie, but certainly not a loon). But I used Stu's name because Stu (our Stu) is in an analogous position to the Stu in that book, who was the earth-side ally and representative and agent of the lunar revolutionaries.

As I think of it, Ron was probably inspired by Hazel from the same novel, a young girl who the narrator first sees during a riot, bowling over one of the Authority guards. That seems like something Ron would do.

There will be more new characters introduced in the current story (at least two, since we haven't met either the victim or the killer yet), but I'll give them names when they appear.

Oh, and speaking of names, a reader asked about when Marshall chooses to refer to Jan as "my employer," when he calls her "my wife," and when he uses her name. This was my answer:

Mostly he refers to her as "my employer" or "Jan." The former is used somewhat more often when it's a professional moment, the latter when it's personal. I think in the scenes when they're in bed together, or preparing for bed (or trying to get her out of bed), she's mostly "Jan."

He refers to her as his wife in that one instance (in the last paragraph here) because the thought wouldn't make much sense otherwise. Why would he enjoy taking a brief trip to the city (just the two of them) with his employer? Only because she's also his wife. And remember (though I just thought of this now) these are two people whose life together has mostly been traveling, always just the two of them. Now that they don't get to do it that often, they probably enjoy it even more. Which is probably related to her sudden desire to spend some smooching time with her hubby, though mostly that's because she's in such a good mood in general (with the college thing apparently going to work out).

My idea (at this stage, subject to change) is that the stories are designed to be read in order, so the "big reveal" that they are married is at the end of the first one ("She put her arms around me and we kissed, and I could feel the tears fall from her eyes to my cheeks, and maybe some the other way, too. That's what it's like when you're married to a detective. You sometimes have moments like this on blood-splattered sofas in murder rooms.")

After that, the alert reader should be remembering that they're married, even if I don't refer to it a lot. If someone should forget and then be reminded, all the better, because it makes the point of how complex their relationship is.

names (part two)

First of all, the origin of the name U-town itself. It's short for Undertown, as we learned here, and "Undertown" was suggested by the Overtown Riots back in the previous century.

In the scene linked to above, Doc says that she never noticed that "Utown" suggested "Utopia." Until shortly before I wrote that scene, neither had I.

As for other names of places and people, many of them are pretty random. Some (Jan Sleet and starling, for two examples) I've been writing about for around 35 years, so I have no more memory of where the names came from originally.

But quite a few names are references to old-time radio programs, all of which were off the air before I was born.

I Love a Mystery

There are quite a few references in U-town to the classic radio program "I Love a Mystery." Doc, Ray and Jack are named for Jack, Doc and Reggie, the main characters on the show. Doc Long's red hair, his way of speaking, and certain aspects of his personality ended up with Carl, the February Island Coffee Shop is named for one of the adventures on the show, and Doc Morse got her last name from the creator, writer and director of the series, Carlton E. Morse. (Carlton E. Morse also created another program, One Man's Family, which I've referred to also.) Doc's backstory (medical school and an abortion) is derived from Jack Packard's history on the show. Oh, and at one point in U-town somebody says, "It's as black as the inside of a cow in here," which is a line from ILAM.

Pat Novak for Hire

Inspector Novak is a reference to another show, called "Pat Novak for Hire." His name is from the title character, of course, but his personality is from Pat Novak's nemesis, Inspector Hellman. The Professor is somewhat based on Pat Novak's alcoholic friend Jocko Madigan. And when Rex says that Inspector Novak couldn't find a moose in a bathtub, that was originally said about Inspector Hellman.

Of course, Inspector Novak and The Professor can also be traced to Blick and Kit Carson from The Time of Your Life (and there are too many references to that play in the The Dream, Now chapter to list here).

Tapman Memorial Park is named after Tapman's vacant lot, where Rush used to play baseball on the show "Vic & Sade."

"Uncle Mike" Sheldon was a character (a local political boss) on one episode of the Sam Spade radio program.

Duffy's Tavern (and Archie the manager) is a reference to the show of the same name, but (unlike the other shows mentioned), it was not, in my opinion, a great show.

There's not much in A Sane Woman that references anything else, but I should mention that there is one reference to Fred Allen (when Sarah calls Nicky "Portland"), and one to the Ellery Queen mystery stories, since that's where the name "Nicky Porter" came from. Ellery's secretary was named Nikki Porter, and (as T.C. points out) it was an alias, though this was usually not mentioned.

names (part one)

I thought the last entry was a little skimpy, so I decided to answer a question which might be asked someday, which is where the chapter titles in U-town came from.

Some are obviously literal ("The Funeral," "starling"), but most are not. So, here is the scoop on this question.

arrival -- the title of the first episode of the classic television show "The Prisoner"

a world so alive -- a quote from the lyrics of the Television song "Venus"

the mystery dance -- an Elvis Costello song, from his first album

prove it (just the facts) -- another Television song

pre-war housing -- a sign I saw on a building once, which made me think that it should have been more specific about which war it was referring to

in the chapter starling, most of the episode titles are episodes of "The Prisoner" ("Once Upon a Time," "The Girl Who Was Death," "Arrival," "Living in Harmony"), or references to "The Prisoner" ("In the Village," "Information"). "At the Edge of the City" is a song I wrote a long time ago

live through this -- the album by the band Hole (my favorite album of the 1990s)

curse the darkness -- a song I co-wrote once ("A Change of Mind" is another Prisoner episode)

like crazy paving -- the chapter title which works on the most different levels, since it's from a song called "Rattlesnakes," about a girl needing a gun these days (for the rattlesnakes), and it contains the line, "Her heart's like crazy paving, inside out and back to front," which refers both to starling's state of mind and heart, and to the actual state of the pavement in U-town and the tremendous significance this has for her. The song is by Lloyd Cole And The Commotions, but I know it from Tori Amos' cover on "Strange Little Girls"

the forces at work -- a song by the band The Feelies

a short rest -- the chapter in The Hobbit where they rest at Rivendell

the dream, now -- a line from The Time of Your Life

unleashing the demon -- from the comic book Cerebus ("Everything done for the first time unleashes a demon")

on separate stars -- a quote from the Patti Smith song "We Three"

In the new novel:

Always Crashing in the Same Car -- a song by David Bowie on the album "Low" (I think I will do something called "Sound and Vision" at some point, too)

The U-town Murder Case -- a reference to the Philo Vance mystery novels, where the title was always "The xxxxxx Murder Case," with "xxxxxx" always having six letters (Greene, Bishop, Canary). I cheat with the hyphen, of course

next time: the names of places and people