the big reveal

I've been thinking about the big reveal in stories. You know, like the Big Surprise in The Crying Game or The Sixth Sense. There are a few reasons this has been on my mind.

  • I just rewatched Fight Club, including listening to the commentary track by the director and stars,
  • I just read a story which had a big reveal, and
  • Of course, I'm writing mystery stories.

Mystery stories, by their nature, have a big reveal: the solution to the mystery. But I've never found that the mystery and its solution are the main reason I'm drawn to certain mystery series and writers. And, listening to the commentary track for Fight Club, it was pretty clear that the actors and director were far more interested in the reveal than I was.

For the actors, of course, it made sense, since they had to play the parts. But it wasn't what made the movie good, it wasn't why people quote it all the time, it wasn't why there's "Jane Austin's Fight Club" (google it immediately if you haven't seen it). And, if Fight Club was really just about guys beating each other up, why are the biggest FC fans I've known all young women? (Which is why the Jane Austin clip is so great.)

Why do I read and re-read the Nero Wolfe mysteries? Not because of the mysteries, though some of them are very good. But mostly to spend time with Wolfe and Archie and Fritz and Saul Panzer and Cramer and the gang.

On the other hand, though the mystery and the reveal are not the most important thing, you do have to handle them correctly. As I refer to here, one of the problems with The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo is that it is a good mystery, surprisingly classical in its construction, but it isn't handled correctly. When the solution to the mystery is revealed over one hundred pages before the end of the book, the rest of the book inevitably becomes a letdown.

Full disclosure: I knew the secret in The Sixth Sense before I saw the movie, from reading reviews. Movie critics like to hint when they know something you don't, and if you put enough hints together you can get to the fact. I still enjoyed the movie. I knew the secret in The Crying Game for the same reason most New Yorkers did – they did a survey when the movie came out, and (for some weird reason) people in New York weren't fooled. But it was still a good movie, and not only because it quotes, more than once, the story of the frog and the scorpion from Orson Welles' film Mr. Arkadin. And I had no interest in The Village at all until I read a spoiler online. I did enjoy the movie, unlike many people, and I never would have seen it if it hadn't known the "twist" ending.

With Fight Club I didn't have a clue.

Which brings us to spoilers, a topic I talked about here. The Time article I link to, the one that started me thinking about this, seems to have been removed (or at least the link now goes to a different, though related, article). I also had a link to an article on Slate about spoilers, and that seems to be gone completely. Conspiracy?

I also saw this article on the A. V. Club website: What really constitutes a spoiler?, which led me to this article, which talks about Cerebus, as I did here.

At least the A. V. Club leaves their articles online.

k. i. s. s.

I've watched The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, and it was interesting to see the differences between the book and the movie. Many things were handled better in the movie (as I thought they would be), but I do wonder how many of them were changed because the screenwriter and director realized that there was room for improvement, and how many were simply because there wasn't enough time to follow what was in the book.

Of course, there will be spoilers. Press "show" to go further.

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In tech geek news, I was dissatisfied with the "Recent Posts" links over there on the right, since I wanted it to show only the real posts, and not the ones which are merely plugs for new stuff over at utownwriting.com. So, I poked around, and found some PHP code that would do the job, placed in a "widget."

I've ignored widgets until now, but it turns out they're ways to customize the blocks of links over there on the right. Until now, I've done that manually, like adding the list of characters. And the new widget worked fine, but it turns out that once you enable widgets, all the stuff you coded manually gets wiped out. So, I had to scramble to recreate the "Characters" listing as a widget.

But now I can't remember if there was anything else over there. Characters, recent posts, categories, meta. I think that was everything...

uncle stevie and me

So, it turned out that...

I write like
Stephen King

I Write Like by Mémoires, Mac journal software. Analyze your writing!

Hey, not bad company. I pasted in the first chapter of A Sane Woman, so it got a pretty big sample to work with. Based on the comments I saw, a lot of people get "Dan Brown," which most of them found disappointing.

I did love one comment: "JAMES JOYCE BITCH!"

One person pasted in some Vonnegut and it came back with Kurt Vonnegut, so that's something. And Stephen King is not really an influence on me (mostly because I was writing this way long before I ever read anything of his), but there are definitely similarities.

The first thing I ever read by Stephen King was The Green Mile, which I talked about here and here.

sweden, i’m in sweden

The good news today is that you can now buy the excellent film Let the Right One In with the correct subtitles. Amazon has had a blurb for a while saying that if you ordered the DVD, you might get the regular subtitles (booo!), or you might get the theatrical subtitles (yay!). (Google "Let the Right One In subtitles" to find out the scoop.)

Now they will send you the correct version. Yes, I bought it again, and watched it, and enjoyed it even more than before. The box quotes the Washington Examiner saying, "Best. Vampire Movie. Ever." Not sure I'd be so definitive, but I can't think of one that's better.

(Not to be confused with the upcoming crappy Hollywood remake.)

In other Swedish news, I finished The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo. Well, I confess I skimmed the last 100 pages or so. The villain is revealed on page 438, the villain is dispatched on page 459, and the final mystery is solved on page 487. And then the book goes on for another 103 pages. Many of which consist of emails the characters write to each other.

I may write more about the book at some point, but I will mention that it is on the cover of Entertainment Weekly this week, and there's an interesting sidebar called "Did Larsson Have a Problem with Women?" by Missy Schwartz. It doesn't seem to be online for some reason – but if it's posted later I will add a link here (link). I think the piece makes some good points. (By the way, I do think Ms. Schwartz may be wrong about Salander getting breast implants – I read that scene as saying that she was wearing falsies as part of a disguise. As I say, though, I was skimming, so maybe I missed the implants. If I'm wrong, that just shows how far things went off the tracks at the end.)

I am still looking forward to the movie (out soon on DVD, not to be confused with the upcoming Hollywood remake).

In news with no direct connection with Sweden, there is more of "The Sister Mystery" posted. The new parts begin here.

questions about men who hate women

I've been reading Men Who Hate Women (aka The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo) and I have a few questions.

Why do I need to know the manufacturer of every consumer device in the book?

Why do I need to know so many technical details about Salander's computers? (This part is particularly funny because the only real effect is to make the book seem completely out-of-date, since the "top of the line" has moved a lot in the last five years.)

Why is so much being told and so little being shown? (At times it reminds me of Wonder Boys; I expect any minute to come to the dental records and the genealogies of the horses.)

Why is Salander described in so much detail (including her "slender bones" and her "childlike breasts") but Blomkvist isn't described at all?

Why am I getting so much information about characters I've not been given any reason to care about?

Why is so much geographical detail being given when it would be so much easier to have a map? (Actually, a family tree would be a good idea, too.)

I was very surprised and pleased when a very traditional Agatha Christie-style mystery suddenly manifested in the middle of the book (a crime happens in an area which is completely cut off from the rest of the world – so there is, apparently, a finite set of suspects). Will this mystery actually be solved? I hope so, and I even have a few ideas, but it's early yet.

Will Salander and Blomkvist ever meet? I expect they will (though it will be interesting if they don't). I even have a premonition they they will become lovers, which will be unfortunate and (duh!) predictable.

In a related question, is Blomkvist going to sleep with every women he meets?

Was the name changed from Men Who Hate Women to The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo because the latter was considered more commercial or because the former gives away too much?

I look forward to the movie, which comes out on DVD on July 6, since at least some of these problems will have been solved there.